Subject: Revised flier
Thanks for the feedback on the flier
• Uses simpler language that audience will understand
• Connects with their frustrations
• Paints a picture of the ideal world for audience
• Is easier to understand what the hell is on offer!
• Has a story about me
• Makes the bonuses clearer
• Has a PS to create more interest
So thanks again – feel free to use this in a testimonial (the Master & his Apprentice?) I’ll keep you posted on results.
Andrew of Andrew Huffer & Associates
M: 0429 470 285